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             I spent a lot of time on Scratch; I learnt basic programming and made friends this way.
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-            On 2020-05-20, a friend group would create a Discord DM for learning HTML.
-            While the DM derailed eventually, I became hooked on programming!
+            On 2020 May 20, a friend group would create a Discord DM for learning HTML.
+            While the DM derailed eventually, I would learn more non-Scratch programming over time.
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-            Currently, I am aiming to diversify my experience and learn managerial skills.
+            Currently, I am aiming to diversify my experience and learn project management skills.
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