From 7072d37a3701e73ba2711ca1b856ffa3a6f599d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: 08draven <eggseggsarecool+git@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2024 00:25:39 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] update story

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 index.html | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index d428b2e..f25dfe6 100644
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@@ -54,10 +54,11 @@
         </p>
         <p>
             On 2020 May 20, a friend group would create a Discord DM for learning HTML.
-            While the DM derailed eventually, I would learn more non-Scratch programming over time.
+            While the DM derailed eventually, I would learn more non-Scratch programming via making many experimental
+            projects.
         </p>
         <p>
-            Currently, I am aiming to diversify my experience and learn project management skills.
+            Currently, at the age of 16, I am aiming to diversify my experience and learn project management skills.
         </p>
     </div>
 </body>